Bischoff,+Tyburczy,+Corbett,+Sasdi+RESEARCH+PAPER

~Italian Hair and Makeup by Ashley Bischoff, Oivia Sasdi, Bernie Corbett, and D.J. Tyburczy~
Your thesis statement should be here! The rest of this outline looks great! Paragraph 1 (opening) a) Introducing Italian hair and makeup b) Introduce Italian hairstyles c) Introduce Italian makeup d) Thesis Statement

Paragraph 2 ( body 1) a) Introduce how hairstyles and makeup vary between gender (all year round/ most popular) b) Women hairstyles and makeup c) Men hairstyles d) Young girls hairstyles and makeup e) Young boys hairstyles f ) Closing statement

Paragraph 3 ( body 2)  a) Introduce how hairstyles and makeup vary between seasons ( spring, fall, winter, summer) b) seasonal hairstyles and makeup for women c) seasonal hairstyles for men d) seasonal hairstyles and makeup for girls e) seasonal hairstyles for boys f) Explain the most popular season for fashion g) Closing statement

Paragraph 4 (body 3) a) Introduce how hairstyles and makeup vary between personalities b) Explain personalities of Italians in general c) personalities of women when it comes to hair and makeup (how they feel about fashion and how they look/ applies to all) d) personalities of men when it comes to hair e) personalities of girls when it comes to hair and makeup f) personalities of boys when it comes to hair g) Closing statement

Paragraph 5 (Closing) a) Repeat thesis statement (rephrase) b) Explain how Italian hair and makeup are a big role in Italy and how it is important to Italians c) Closing statement for essay

Italian hair and makeup is a huge part of Italian culture, from hair, to face makeup, and to clothing. Italian women are considered the most beautiful women in the world and the men are considered the most handsome. Italians keep their hair long and a beautiful rich dark color. Women keep their makeup simple and elegant. Hair and makeup are an enormous part of Italians appearance and they like to keep their styles realistic and appropriate. Men, women, and young children in Italy love hair and makeup, and the styles vary between gender, seasons, and personalities. Great introduction paragraph! Italian people really know best when it comes to hair and makeup. Men and women usually base their hair styles on their gender and what’s popular. Women will do their hair various ways and styles such as braiding their hair or slicking it back. Most women like to keep their hair neat, with a wide selection of things to do with hair by either braiding it, putting it in a pony tail, or curls or curves, which, means wavy. Younger girls like to keep their hair long or short. (Senga, Altaliana pg. 1) citations only need the authors last name and page number. They also like to have curls or have their hair pin straight. Men’s hair is a simple look. Their look is clean shaven or short cut hair. Men use lots of products and love having their hair healthy. Some styles would be big or slicked back. Younger boys are slightly different from older men. The younger boys like to keep their hair slightly long or short with curls or spikes (Senga, Altaliana pg. 1). Other than having women loving their hair, they also love to be gorgeous and have their makeup up to date and looking sharp. Makeup for Italian women isn’t too heavy. They usually wear dull colors around the eye area and bright red lipstick. Pupa is a huge makeup company in Italy. It has every type of makeup possible and Italian women just love it. Pupa is one of the top makeup lines in Italy and is loved by all women.( Ottanell, Nicla pg.1). All hair and make differs for each person especially in Italy having hair and makeup be so important. Beauty in Italy is huge and important to every single person there.  Good transition to a new paragraph. Hairstyles and makeup vary between the seasons of summer, spring, fall, and winter. For every new season there is a new style to come. Italian women are considered the most beautiful women in the world and the men are the most handsome and, when it comes to fashion Italians know there their styles best! (Angelis, Juliana D pg.1). When the leaves turn bright red, yellow, and orange, fall fashions come into play. In the fall, Italian women like th eir hair cute and rather short and, sometimes with fancy buns on top of their heads. Italian women usually like their hair to be long and elegant but, in the fall season it's all about change. In the winter Italian women like to keep their hair at a shoulder length or longer. They grow out there hair to be this long in the winter because in the winter they like to show how beautiful their hair can be! Spring time is the biggest time for new trends. It is almost summer and women are looking for new and, exciting looks. They grow their hair out until it becomes fairly long, and flip, curl, crimp, and accessorize their hair.(Angelis, Juliana D. Pg.1). After spring comes summer and summer is the time that women can show off their inner and outer beauty. Their personalities are bright and sunny just like summer and their hair become a variety of styles such as short, blonde, brown, curled, and much more.(Angelis, Juliana D pg.1). Summer is a time where Italians bring out their personalities and show of what they got! Great details and information - this should be the beginning of a new paragraph In addition to gorgeous hair women also like to apply a decent amount of makeup.(Segna, Altaliana D. pg.1) When Italians need to choose a makeup brand most women choose the makeup brand //Pupa//. Pupa is a high quality makeup company that supplies just about every kind of makeup that Italian women are looking for.( Ottanell, Nicla pg. 1). When most Italian women open up their Christmas stockings they hope to find a makeup product from Pupa. Young Italian girls are not huge on makeup but just like their mothers they love to due up their hair in as many different styles that they can. The seasonal hairstyle trends are the same as their mothers. In the fall it is relatively short hair. In the winter it is shoulder length. I the spring it is lots of curls, curves, and braids. In the summer it is the time to express their inner and outer beauty. For young men and grown men slicked back hair is popular all year round weather it is summer, fall, spring, or winter. They like to keep their hair clean cut and slicked back most of the time. This applies to both young boys and grown men.(<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">Segna, Altaliana D. pg.1) Hair and makeup are <span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(2, 3, 3); line-height: 115%; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">extremely important to women and men of all ages, although makeup does not apply to men. Hair and makeup are a big part of Italian people's <span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(2, 3, 3); line-height: 115%; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">appearances and help bring out both their inner and outer beauty! <span style="color: rgb(0, 197, 255);">

__media type="youtube" key="ccsi4iMIqG8" height="344" width="425"Christmas Pupa commercial.__<span style="color: rgb(0, 197, 255);"> Hair styles are very important to Italians and their personality can change it on a whim. The Italian's prospective is basically white skin, blond hair, red lips and checks, and black eyebrows.(Ottanell, Nicla pg.1). W omen have long and neat hair with a wide use of hair-bands or headbands. Women's personalities are generally kind and happy. Women's hairstyles and makeup help express their individual personalities. Men's hair styles are usually c lean shaven hair, or rugged 'big' hair is a must. Also men's simple hairstyles help bring out their individual personalities. Boys hair comes, in a wide variety such as slightly longhair, curls, spiky, and of course short hair.( Angelis, Juliana D pg.1). Boys also follow grown men and usually have their hair clean, cut, and shaven. Young Italian girls hair are filled with braids, pony tails, playful braids, curls, strait, short, and of course long hair. Young girl's <span style="font-size: 10pt; color: black; line-height: 115%; font-family: 'Verdana','sans-serif';">especially like to due up their hair.( Segna, Altaliana D. pg. 1) All women of all ages also prefer long hair over short hair because they love to due up their hair. Girls use creams, moisturizers, and other cleansers for their makeup.( Ottanell, Nicla pg 1). Younger girls usually do not where makeup but when they reach adulthood they do. Every gender and age has a different use of hair and makeup that defines them. In Italy, hair and makeup play a huge roll in Italians lives, although styles change between gender, personalities and even seasons. To Italians hair and makeup is very important and one main reason is beauty is one of their major <span style="font-size: 10pt; color: black; line-height: 115%; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif';">businesses’. Also they have a reputation to live up to it. They have one of the largest influences on fashion and beauty and also including their amazing designs.(Segna, Altaliana D. pg.1)Don't forget their beautiful people too. To Italian people one, of the most important things to them is their beauty and they sure do a good job at showing it off!

<span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">This paper is well written, has great detail, and is interesting! Great job!

The works cited should not be separated by type of souce, this should just be one works cited in ABC order!

<span style="color: rgb(0, 54, 255);">Internet Websights
Angelis, Juliana D. " Brief History of Italian Fashion." []. 2009

"Italian Fashion." []. Date and author N/A

Ottanell, Nicla. "Italian Brand of Skin Care and Makeup." __[].__ 2009.

Sanderson, Lisa A. "Beauty and Makeup." __[].__ 2004.

Segna, Altaliana D. "The Journey to be an Italian Beauty;." __[].__ 2001.

<span style="color: rgb(0, 36, 255);">Data Bases
Nickels, Greg. "Italian Fashion." __[].__ 2001.

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<span style="color: rgb(0, 31, 255); background-color: rgb(234, 240, 239);">Books
Hoehner, Jane. __World Culture__. Detriot, Michagan: Publisher N/A, 1999.

Mactin, Robert C. __People and PLaces__. Chicago, Illinios: Publisher N/A, 2003.

<span style="display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; color: rgb(38, 0, 255); background-color: rgb(255, 0, 208); text-align: left;">Rubrics for your Research Paper

- The research paper must contain a thesis statement that is discussed and proven in the paper. Stick to your topic. 50 pts +50 -Paper discuss beauty in the culture you were assigned and also reflects on how that beauty is maintained. 30pts +30 -Each group must complete an outline BEFORE they start writing their paper and submit it with the final paper. 20 pts +20 - Parenthetical citations (in MLA format) must be used correctly throughout paper. 25 pts +20 - A works cited page must be included at the end of your paper. 20 pts +15 -Researched information must be paraphrased correctly or in quotes. 25 pts +25 --Each group has used at LEAST two book sources, one internet source, and one database source. 15 pts +15 - Paper includes photos and video that enhance writing. 40pts +40 -Paper contains correct spelling, transitions, complex sentence structures, and good vocabulary. 20 pts +20 -Photos and video are placed in appropriate places in the paper. 15pts +15 <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);"> Total Points: 250 /260 = 96 A Well done!