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Topic: Itailian beauty ::

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^ Greenwood, Judith A. "Italian fashion." __Slow Travel Italy .__ 2000. 18 Mar. 2009. .  While fashion and Italy seem to have been connected for centuries, the birthplace of Italian fashion can be traced back to 1951, when a fashion show was staged in Florence. From a social perspective, Italians began to view fashion as an important way of self-expression and self-assertion. A nation that doesn’t particularly tolerate sloppy dressing, Italian Fashion soon began to take off from here.
 * ===**Their thick, shiny, dark hair, big brown eyes and hour-glass figures made American women envious and anxious to learn their beauty secrets.>works cited: Sanderson, Lisa A. "Beauty and make up." Beauty. 2004. 17 Mar. 2009 **** [] **===
 * ===**Italian women known as most beautiful in the world. **===
 * ===**"Sitting in a street side bar is a fashion show here. Gorgeous!" (Judith Ayotte Greenwood) **===
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 * =Fresh Italian ingredients, such as virgin olive oil, grapefruit, and even oranges, are used in moisturizers, cleansers and other creamsItalians love to show off, but mostly in an individualistic, understated way: while their clothes fit, they still allow room for sensual movement.Italians don't care how uncomfortable it is to obtain fasion [] =
 * Italian Fashion is well regarded for its sophisticated style and its elegant designs. While Italian Fashion Designers like Giorgio Armani, Gucci, Prada, and Versace produce items that are not cheap, the money is worth it. After all, if you buy an italian fashion product, you aren’t just buying a piece of clothing – rather, you are buying an attitude of class and sophistication. Italian Fashion is well known for producing some of the best high end clothing out there and it is guaranteed to impress people when you walk around decked out in Italian Fashion. For Italians, it is not about clothes at all. Italian fashion is actually all about an attitude: an attitude of custom-made, fluid, sophistication.
 * While fashion and Italy seem to have been connected for centuries, the birthplace of Italian fashion can be traced back to 1951, when a fashion show was staged in Florence. From a social perspective, Italians began to view fashion as an important way of self-expression and self-assertion. A nation that doesn’t particularly tolerate sloppy dressing, Italian Fashion soon began to take off from here.

http://www.ringsurf.com/online/729-italian_fashion.html Thesis:


=Italian beauty and fashion has an impact on America and Americans. = Italian policemen wear uniforms designed by Armani. The streets of Rome are always brimming with impeccably dressed women donning the latest designs. What is truly fascinating about the Italian fashion style is their desire to stand out. One can see that the normal Italians, <span class="IL_LINK_STYLE" style="font-weight: 400; font-size: 12px; color: rgb(51, 51, 255); font-style: normal; font-family: Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">__the women__ who go to work each morning do not dress to blend in with the crowd [] <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);"> Why are all these notes on this page? This page should just be the final product!

=Research Paper Outline: <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">Outline looks good = =Topic-Italian Beauty= =Thesis- Italian Beauty has had, and still does, have an impact on America and Americans.= =A. Intro: the effect Italian beauty/fashion has on others= =B. Impact of Italian beauty on Americans.= =1.their hair= =2. there skin= =3. Fashion= =C. how they take care of there beauty= =1. what they use= =2. how they use it.=

=D. conclusion= =1. what we learned in conclusion=

Research paper. <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">Why is this bold and in a huge font?

=Italian beauty is the main factor in Italy. It doesn't matter how uncomfortable people are, fashion and beauty is what counts. Italians' beauty looks have made Americans jealous for years. Italian Beauty has had, and still does, have an impact on America and Americans. People say, "Sitting in a street side bar is a fashion show here" (Judith Ayotte Greenwood). All the things together that make Italians beautiful is something that they work hard to use and express.<span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);"> Good intro =

=For many years all the Italians unique beauty has been <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">had a big impact on others. The biggest things that catch Americans eyes is there <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">wrong one dark hair and their big brown eyes. These beauty factors have made Americans anxious to find out the Italians beauty secrets. Italian Fashion has also made Americans jealous. They dress different to stand out and do not dress to blend in. In the 1500's women wore feet length slevless <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">spelling dresses (Willet C). Now Italian women wear denim jeans and highheels with a pointed toe crystal nose studs are also popular in Italy (Martha Miller). Even though fashion is costly in Italy, it does not matter.Hollywood loved their clothes, so many of the stars you see on the red carpet are wearing Italian clothes, because they stand out, and look just gorgeous ( pg. 1, Ghosh, Damyanti) <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">Citations are just last name of author and page number. = =Taking care of yourself <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">avoid "you" and "your" in professional writing can take time, but in Italy it could take a lot of time. There are many products Italians have to choose from. Olive Oil is used in a lot of beauty products. The oldest Olive tree is about 2,400 years old (Martha Miller)! Creams and moisturizers are very popular in Italy, and they love to show it off with their individuality.<span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);"> How do creams show of their individuality? One of their many beauty secrets is, Italian Olive Oil. It takes a lot to have the beauty techniques in the right way to create<span style="background-color: rgb(0, 14, 255);"> full Italian Beauty.= <span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">media type="custom" key="3509556" = = ==One of the most important things that was found in our research <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">NO don't say this just write the facts is to be your self and use fashion and beauty in your own way. Its very important to be fresh and use beauty in your own way. In order to be fresh you wouldn't use a bunch of make up you would be dark skinned and dared eyed. Even if you don't have dark features you can still look fresh and beautiful. Italy, like any other country, has it's own unique sense of style and their own view on what is beautiful. Different countries have different opinions on what they think is beautiful. The products that Italian's have used most say what many Italians view as beautiful. ==

=In conclusion, it doesn't matter how uncomfortable<span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); color: rgb(255, 0, 255);"> you are when succeeding Italian fashion and beauty, beauty is pain. No wonder why many Americans are jealous of Italians. Americans can use the Italians' beauty secrets or fashion tips and become even more beautiful then now. You can always become beautiful, it might be costly, but in the end it does not matter.When it comes to beauty, you can always fit it in, to express who you are.= <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">This paper is okay but it could use more detail and YOU or YOUR should NEVER be used in professional writing. Always proofread! Video??

WORKS CITED: <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">Only 3 sources??? Should be in ABC order Greenwood, Judith A. "Italian Fashion." __Slow Travel Italy.__ 2000. 18 Mar. 2009. [].

Cali, Barnossa C. "Italian Beauty Secrets." __Baronessa Cali.__ 24 Feb. 2009. 24 Mar. 2009. [].

Cunnington, Willet C. "Women's Clothing." __Women's Clothing.__ 1992. 25 Mar. 2009. <http://www.lepg.org/women.htm>.

<span style="display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; color: rgb(38, 0, 255); background-color: rgb(255, 0, 208); text-align: left;">Rubrics for your Research Paper

- The research paper must contain a thesis statement that is discussed and proven in the paper. Stick to your topic. 50 pts +50 -Paper discuss beauty in the culture you were assigned and also reflects on how that beauty is maintained. 30pts +20 -Each group must complete an outline BEFORE they start writing their paper and submit it with the final paper. 20 pts +20 - Parenthetical citations (in MLA format) must be used correctly throughout paper. 25 pts +20 - A works cited page must be included at the end of your paper. 20 pts +15 -Researched information must be paraphrased correctly or in quotes. 25 pts +25 --Each group has used at LEAST two book sources, one internet source, and one database source. 15 pts +10 - Paper includes photos and video that enhance writing. 40pts +20 -Paper contains correct spelling, transitions, complex sentence structures, and good vocabulary. 20 pts +10 -Photos and video are placed in appropriate places in the paper. 15pts +8

<span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">Total Points: 198/260 = 78 C+


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=Taking care of yourself can take time, but in Italy it could take a lot of time.=

=it doesn't matter how uncomfortable you are when succeeding Italian fashion and beauty, beauty is pain.=

=No wonder why many Americans are jealous of Italians.=

=Italian beauty is the main factor in Italy.=

=It doesn't matter how uncomfortable people are, fashion and beauty is what counts.=

=Even though fashion is costly in Italy, it does not matter.=

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