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Chivalry Sports, Inc. 2001 Turban Instructions page 1 Turban Wrapping Instructions over your head with one side shorter than the other. The left side should be about the length of your arm. wrapping the long side first to back then bring it__
 * 1**. Begin by draping the turban
 * 2**. Holding the turban fabric tight to the head begin

forward over the short side that is hanging down on your left shoulder. head. Twist the fabric slightly as you do. Bring it around the back and allow to drape over your left shoulder. under the chin, over the head and arrange the end to cover the back of the neck like a veil. === = Chivalry Sports ©Chivalry Sports, Inc. 2001 Turban Instructions page 2 media type="youtube" key="RtRfx3fKFd0" height="344" width="425" long end until you get to the end of the fabric. turban. Turban. chin drape start with equal amounts of fabric on each side. Twist each side into a loose rope and wind around the head. Alternate between the left and right side so that they overlap. Tuck in the ends.
 * 3**. Wrap the turban around the front of the
 * 4**. Take the short end of the turban and drape it
 * 5**. Continue wrapping and twisting the
 * 6**. Tuck the end of the fabric into the folds of the
 * 7**. The finished wrapped
 * 8**. To wrap a turban without a

 Mrs. Kopp's comments will be in PURPLE!
 * __Topic: Indian Beauty__**


 * __Thesis Statement:__** Clothing is a piece of beauty that allows self expression to come out. Each culture wears different styles of clothing. In the United States people wear all types of clothing because the U.S. is made up of people from various countries. Clothing in India is very different from clothing in America. Clothing in India has changed the world's opinion of beauty due to its beautiful and majestic culture which is expressed in the clothing's bright colors and intricate patterns. Is this your thesis or your intro paragraph? I seems like the last sentence in this paragraph is the thesis.

**__Outline__** 1. Overall Men's clothing. A. Kurta Pajama/ Kurta Salwar Jacket B. Sherwani C.Jodhpuri Suit D.Pathani Suit E. Turban

2. Celebration Clothing A. Sherwani B. Salwar-Kameez C. Turban D.Embroidered Vest

3. Traditional Clothing A.Dhoti B.Lungi C.Sherwani D.Kurta-Payjama E.Turban Outline looks good


 * __Men's Clothing__** It is not necessary to label each section of the paper.

Clothing is a piece of beauty that allows self expression to come out. Each culture wears different styles of clothing. In the United States people wear all types of clothing because the U.S. is made up of people from various countries. Clothing in India is very different from clothing in America. Clothing in India has changed the world's opinion of beauty due to its beautiful and majestic culture which is expressed in the clothing's bright colors and intricate patterns. Great introduction paragraph!

Men's clothing in India are often very vibrant and colorful but it depends on what religion they are, there are many religions such as, dhoti,Islam, Sikhism, Buddhism, Christianity, Jainism, and Hinduism are just some of the wonderful religions of India. This is an example of a very nice and comfortable Kurta that is worn in the scorching summer time of India by men. It's informal name is just pajamas. We get the word pajamas from the word "pa" which means leg and "jama" which means garment in Indian. A sherwani is typically worn on special occasions such as fancy celebrations and many others.give some examples of the celebrations here The President and Prime minister and all government officials wear a formal black sherwani(wikipedia) punctuation should go after the citation because it's part of the sentence.

The difference between a Kurta Pajama and Kurta Payjama is the Kurta Pajama is obviously what you avoid using you or your in professional writing wear to bed, and a Kurta Payjama are loose pants that you tie at the waist when a Pajama is just a big gown. Men generally in India wear clothing that has more of a Western look to it. India is known across the Earth for their beautiful and exotic costumes and their delightful dresses. Indian people express themselves a lot through their clothing. A spiritual quest for perfections plays a part in their choices of colored, dramatic and flowing clothes. interesting! In the festival called Holi Indian people splash themselves and others with water and color! So everyone ends up with beautiful colors no matter what they were wearing to start with. This festival is a very happy time wear a lot of people wear lots of jewelry and very vibrant colors and patterns to kind of "show off." Interesting - citations?

**__Women's Clothing__**
One type of clothing worn by women in India is called a Sari. A sari is a dress worn in many ways. One way is wrapping it around in a fancy manor and tucking in the end so the bottom of the dress is dragging along the floor, (as seen in the picture to the right). The reason why the Sari drags along the floor is because when your purchase it it is not cut and fitted for the lady wearing it.

Another type of woman's clothing is the Choli. The Choli is a quite common tight shirt worn very often when women in India are not going out or going somewhere fancy, it is like wearing a t-shirt in America. The Choli is a tightly fitted blouse worn either with sleeves or no sleeves. Most of the time the Choli is worn without a back. Cholis match with a lot of other wear, however, some Saris are made to match with Cholis. Citations for these paragraphs? As said in National Geographic, "Jewelry dominates gold consumption" (43). "Women in India have more of a show-ff way of looking good" National Geographic (46). "Women's Clothing in India are more variant and colorful than most men's, however, there are some customizable clothing for men that can be just as colorful and standing out." Encyclopedia Cultures (98). Most men and women in India wear what has been passed on from generation to generation as a tradition when it comes to fancy celebrations and special occasions such as marriage." National Geographic(52) - these are excellent quotes but they should be incorporated into the paper and where is your closing paragraph?

Do you have a video? Works Cited: good but this should be in ABC order

Vivísimo, Vivísimo . "Women's clothing in India." __www.clusty.com__. 2009. Vivísimo . 30 Mar 2009
Rubrics for your Research Paper

- The research paper must contain a thesis statement that is discussed and proven in the paper. Stick to your topic. 50 pts +40 -Paper discuss beauty in the culture you were assigned and also reflects on how that beauty is maintained. 30pts +30 -Each group must complete an outline BEFORE they start writing their paper and submit it with the final paper. 20 pts +20 - Parenthetical citations (in MLA format) must be used correctly throughout paper. 25 pts +10 - A works cited page must be included at the end of your paper. 20 pts +15 -Researched information must be paraphrased correctly or in quotes. 25 pts +25 --Each group has used at LEAST two book sources, one internet source, and one database source. 15 pts +15 - Paper includes photos and video that enhance writing. 40pts +20 -Paper contains correct spelling, transitions, complex sentence structures, and good vocabulary. 20 pts +20 -Photos and video are placed in appropriate places in the paper. 15pts +10 <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);"> Total Points: 205 /260 = 79 C+