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Thesis - The Padaung Tribe of Burma has many different views of beauty, and their main custom of involving that is brass coil neck rings.

I. Reason why they are put on ***EMILY and CAL*** A. considered rings on their neck beauty B. was said that it was protected from tiger attacks, and one myth was told that a beautiful dragon wore them C. ancient tradition D. the longest neck is considered the most beautiful

II. How they put them on and age when put on ***EMILY and CAL*** A. start at 5-6 years old (girls) B. wear throughout their entire life, adding on one ring every two years C. doesn't really make the neck longer, pushes the shoulders down and the neck up

III. Consequences ***EMILY and CAL*** A. if you take it off you will die B. the neck muscles are not used because the brass rings support their neck and they will suffocate if they take them off. their head will go down and clog up their throat. C.

IV. Conclusion ***EMILY and CAL*** A. their beauty is seen differently than ours B. they have very different traditions C. different cultures have different beauty