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Mrs. Kopp will make all her comments on each page in PURPLE Okay guys you're not going to believe this - I just spend half an hour grading your paper and putting in a ton of comments and then the wiki page wouldn't save it - they were having an issue with their server so I am going to sum it up here because I don't have time to re-do the comments. Overall the paper was excellent. Very informative and the pictures and videos were great too. There were some spots that did NOT have citations and that is a BIG problem. There were also some pieces that seemed like they needed to be paraphrased better. But the paper did contain lots of great information. Rubrics for your Research Paper

- The research paper must contain a thesis statement that is discussed and proven in the paper. Stick to your topic. 50 pts +50 -Paper discuss beauty in the culture you were assigned and also reflects on how that beauty is maintained. 30pts +30 -Each group must complete an outline BEFORE they start writing their paper and submit it with the final paper. 20 pts +20 - Parenthetical citations (in MLA format) must be used correctly throughout paper. 25 pts +10 - A works cited page must be included at the end of your paper. 20 pts +15 -Researched information must be paraphrased correctly or in quotes. 25 pts +20 --Each group has used at LEAST two book sources, one internet source, and one database source. 15 pts +15 - Paper includes photos and video that enhance writing. 40pts +40 -Paper contains correct spelling, transitions, complex sentence structures, and good vocabulary. 20 pts +15 -Photos and video are placed in appropriate places in the paper. 15pts +15  Total Points: Tom - 220/260= 84 B and Mike - 230/260= 88 B+ Kathy and Megan - 240/260=92 A- These grades are different because I believe that the citations in Kathy and Megans sections were fine, Tom didn't have any at all and Mike was missing some. bn n Topic: Japanese Beauty Research for Japanese Beauty Citations Page OUTLINE!!! Photo Links!

FINAL COPY OF RESEARCH PAPER!

I. Opening Paragraph II. Ancient Fashion III. Modern Fashion Beauty Treatements Art and Monuments Closing Paragraphs

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