OUTLINE!!!

Looks good but you should have your thesis here - and why is the closing empty?? Outline I. Opening Paragraph a. Ancient Fashion b. Modern Fashion c. Beauty Treatments d. Art/Monuments e. Thesis Statement

II. Ancient Fashion- a. Hair b. Traditional Dress c. Shoes d. Fans

III. Modern Fashion a. Kimono b. Harajuku c. Modern trends and street fashion d. Western Fashion

IV. Beauty Treatments a. healthy beauty b.ancient japanese spa culture c. makeup d. modern beauty

V. Art/Monuments a. **big creations** b.**big artists** c. first Japanese art d.modern art VI. Closing a. b. c. d. e.